Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, there are no
such
differences between men
and women
because nowadays girls
also
take part in every field
, while achieving success. In reality, a bit part of society argues that men
and more accurate and flexible instead
of women
.I completely disagree with the statement and discuss it in an upcoming essay.
Firstly
, in the 21st century
nothing has discrimination between sexes. Add a comma
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also
seriously competing in every stage of life as same like
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men
. In general, girl's
performance has increased as compared to the past because now they getting attention to do hard work, focusing more on their talent and Fix the agreement mistake
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Although
, in every field
like education, sports , and job application, there are doing great with men
. For,example, recently the BCCI announced that girls
also
adopt full payment as similar to men
's . As a result
, girls
also
have the potential to survive in this
contemporary era, without boys' support. Secondly
, it is a powerful impact on men
due to women
's support similarly
, why doing
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does doing
.
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On the other hand
, women
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and significantly
the
situations with their presence of mind .Correct article usage
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Therefore
, they work in essential parts of society like in the medical lines, IT sectors , in
the education Correct word choice
and in
field
. So it is wrong to say that women
do not have competitive strength. Furthermore
, the biggest instance, in
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is
first
Indian women
to go the
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Thus
, there are many more analyses showing that there a no difference between the sexes. Whereas , it is considered that men
have a huge ability because of their genes, a level of hormones, with increased testosterone than girls
.
In conclusion, in my prospective
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men
and women
has
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have
a
similar potential towards any specific Correct article usage
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field
. So not doing comparisons between both sexes . Society has to support their
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them
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and strengthen
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