Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, there are no
such
differences between
men
and
women
because nowadays
girls
also
take part in every
field
, while achieving success. In reality, a bit part of society argues that
men
and more accurate and flexible
instead
of
women
.I completely disagree with the statement and discuss it in an upcoming essay.
Firstly
, in the 21st
century
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nothing has discrimination between sexes.
Women
,
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are
also
seriously competing in every stage of life as same
like
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men
. In general,
girl's
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performance has increased as compared to the past because now they getting attention to do hard work, focusing more on their talent and
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their name in patriotism.
Although
, in every
field
like education, sports , and job application, there are doing great with
men
. For,example, recently the BCCI announced that
girls
also
adopt full payment as similar to
men
's .
As a result
,
girls
also
have the potential to survive in
this
contemporary era, without boys' support.
Secondly
, it is a powerful impact on
men
due to
women
's support
similarly
, why
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work outside so much and more positive effect financially
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On the other hand
,
women
rise more accurately ,
significantly
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deal with all
the
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situations with their presence of mind .
Therefore
, they work in essential parts of society like in the medical lines, IT sectors ,
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the education
field
. So it is wrong to say that
women
do not have competitive strength.
Furthermore
, the biggest instance,
in
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Kalpana Chawla become the
first
Indian
women
to go
the
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moon in past.
Thus
, there are many more analyses showing that there a no difference between the sexes. Whereas , it is considered that
men
have a huge ability because of their genes, a level of hormones, with increased testosterone than
girls
. In conclusion, in my
prospective
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,
men
and
women
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a
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similar potential towards any specific
field
. So not doing comparisons between both sexes . Society has to support
their
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,
strengthen
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so
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them so
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they recognise
thier
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their
country
in
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worldwide.
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