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SOME SAY THAT IN ALL LEVELS OF EDUCATION TOO MUCH TIME IS SPENT LEARNING FACTS AND NOT ENOUGH ON LEARNING PRACTICAL SKILLS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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It is irrefutable fact that today's educational qualities are growing .
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 why more people say that
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 vast amount of time is spare for learning facts . But not enough time is spent learning practical things. In my view,
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 statement is true . In
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 paper, I will argue that these reasons are twofold.
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 of all, it is an indisputable fact that we are living in a technology era .
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 is the reason, all
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 centres
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 as
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 must have practice
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 .
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, Japan countryʼs
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 have
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 kind of room. And
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 they teach
children
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 from childhood in
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rooms
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 . After that, the child has experience doing everything. But
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 kind of opportunity has not each
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 centre actually, in every country.
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 why
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 can not experience like Japanese people.
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, they do not have the creativity to discover new technological items .If the world has an educational quality like Japan
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 thing more effective for
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's future life.
On the other hand
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, our country
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 do not have enough laboratory
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 and tools . But
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 thing must be there . Because the has subjects
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 as biology, chemistry and technology. These subjects need laboratory
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 and tools. Because if
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 are always theoretically taught they are not interested in and are not able to do something in these subjects. The government must supply
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 with laboratory
rooms
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. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that today's
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 centres spent too much time on theoretical skills . And they do not have more attention to practising. In my opinion,
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 equally gives attention to both skills.
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