Some people think that to produce a happier society we must ensure that there is only a small difference in earnings between rich and poor. To what extend do you agree?

It is argued whether must be minor revenue differences between rich and poor or not.If people had
have
Change the verb form
had
show examples
similar earnings, would have they lived happier? I personally totally agree with the aforementioned claim and I will explain the reasons which clarify it in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, the people of a nation deserve equal facilities even though they have various occupations. What I mean is that primary needs
such
as medical services, food demand, accommodation and hygiene must be affordable for those who are serving society. Unfortunately, nowadays we are witnessing families who are deprived of basic demands owing to a lack of financial sources and
also
inadequate wages. What your job is, should not affect your primary needs.
On the other hand
, earning differences among folk would make life so competitive.
In other words
, what car to drive will be more important than moral ethics which leads to a mechanical lifestyle.
Moreover
,
this
kind of lifestyle would affect society's physical, mental and spiritual health and
consequently
a less happy life.
For example
, humans are too busy to have regular exercises and be diet conscious.
Hence
, equal wage among nation affects their happiness and health. To sum up, I reiterate that people deserve equality and must be able to afford their basic needs regardless of their job. So, I raise my hand in favour of prosperity and equal rights for every mankind living and working in society.
Submitted by faezehchoobkar on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: