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In the modern world today the rate of divorce is rising dramatically in most societies. What are the main reasons for getting divorced? What can be done to solve the issue?

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Nowadays individualism outweighs love and affection.
As a result
,
separation
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the separation
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 between husbands and
wifes
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wives
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 is remarkably increased. Studies found that among the various factors,
women
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 empowerment and modern values were the major reasons. Here, the following paragraphs
highlights
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 these causes along with some steps that would be helpful to reduce the percentage of divorce... To start with, separation, one of the major social problems is an outcome of
financial
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 freedom of women.
For instance
, if women start to
to
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office
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the office
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 or to earn their
livihood
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livelihood
, they become less dependent on a male member.
On the other hand
, capitalist norms and values which
basically
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 based on individual rights
,
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talks
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 about
the
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equal opportunities for both that
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 in decreasing the tendency of compromising and
tolarence
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tolerance
.
In addition
, modern laws open a door to come out
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 a bad
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... As one of the alarming issues, breakup after marriage demands collective actions.
First
 of all, any type of domestic violence should be
prevent
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 by implementing laws. After that importance of a family
shoul
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should
 be prioritised in
the
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society.
Finally
, couples should respect each other and
honor
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the
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 partner"s opinion. To conclude, in
this
 modern age, intolerance in families is increasing day by day.
Although
 a number of factors work
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, it would be solved by collective efforts. If laws are implemented,
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 values are taken under consideration, people
more
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 likely
prefer
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 to stay together.
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