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Traffic problems are increase in most cities. What can be done about this?

#traffic #cities
In
this
 modern era, the world is developing and competition is
also
 very high.
Therefore
 parents always try to do their best for their
children
, so they encourage their
children
 to take part in organised
group
activities
. But on the other ,hand some people think
children
 need to learn themselves on their own is important to them. In
this
 essay , I will highlight some of my reason and state my opinion on them.
However
, in my opinion, while I believe, there are some benefits of organised
group
activities
. I disagree with
this
 be the most important thing is
children
 occupy themselves on their own. Going forward, one of the major reasons for
this
children
 can enhance their natural talents, if they are doing their learning themselves they can evaluate a range of their knowledge. Some
children
 are born with impressive natural talents, for ,instance 10% of
children
 do their Masters's degree very early age like 15 or 16 years.
Furthermore
,
children
 can enjoy and spend their childhood. Because childhood is the best thing to enjoy life. They can play some sports, watch movies, and spend
time
 with their family members. These all things make a happy child and to be a balanced child. After ,that they can innovate their creativity to explore others and learn their own
Moreover
, organised
group
activities
also
 have a lot of benefits, mainly they can learn their
time
 management useful and effectively be a part of a
group
 member.
Time
 management is very useful for every child to manage their life smoothly. So organized
group
 activity is caused to better
time
 management. In conclusion, in spite of
children
 occupying themselves the foremost thing is that organised team
activities
. Both boon and bane, but when the
children
 need the self-confidence to move with others. Self-motivated, problem-resolving,
children
 make good leaders.
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