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Many children are encoraged by their parents to get a part time. What are the advantages and disadvantage to children of doing so?

#children #parents #part #time
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 it is not surprising when you meet
children
 who are motivated to get a part-time job by their parents. And
this
 situation can have both pros and cons and in the following
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 both of them will be discussed.
To begin
 with, the main advantage of working
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 and putting small steps towards
career
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 as a child is that the outlook of
children
 widens drastically and it will be much
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 to think out of the box, the skill which is so vital in our time
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 when he is already a man. As a child, one thinks that everything parents do is correct and anything they ban is absolutely incorrect. When
thay
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they
 work, they communicate with other
people
, they have more chances to learn from others, they can meet very successful
people
 and get motivation.All of these bring
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positive changes for them
developing
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 their mental and physical skills.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages of
this
 case are that
children
 may get addicted to working and have no more desire for studying.
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 that
children
 can do are usually monotonous
taks
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tasks
 which don't require great mental effort.
For instance
, we all know that
children
 mainly make deliveries or work as a waiter in restaurants in the USA. These jobs can be done almost by everyone, don't require special professional knowledge but are paid
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 quite good rates that can attract even older
people
's interest. And in the
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 after some years we can see millions of
people
 who are physically and mentally healthy but just waiters or couriers. To sum up, I believe that
children
 can get both positive and negative impacts from working from childhood.
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