Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

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modern globalized world, technology is keeping develop and it
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help
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to spread
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news
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on
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internet
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.
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, the past
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years have seen a dramatic decrease
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importance of
newspapers
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. I absolutely disagree to replace
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news
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with
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because it would be unwise.
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with, there are several benefits of
internet
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news
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.
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, it helps to save
time
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because buying
newspapers
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can take one's
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and
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means extra money. Currently, anyone can read online
news
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via their telephones or computers. Another point is that the process of
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namely finding
news
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and printing
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take
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far more
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however
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online reports will provide an up to date information in
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seconds.
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,
newspapers
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also
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have
bad
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affect
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to
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our ecology and lead to some kind of pollution because
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fact, the newspaper process requires
papers
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.
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, papers
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from trees and that
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it will be
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crisis for humanity.
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, after reading
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,
people
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throws
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away it into
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and it will go to recycling that
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, publishing
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comprised of several steps to compare online
news
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.
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, there are still exist
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kind
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of
people
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who read
daily
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news
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from
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and especially they are
aged
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group of
people
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. One of the
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behind
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is they are inappropriate to use online platforms. Nothing compares to
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on
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internet
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yet in a sense, the
people
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who read
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are not concerned about their health because of the
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effects of smartphones or
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screens which hardly ever result in serious health
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. From my personal point of view,
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reading
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news
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from digital platforms can be good for one's
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and finance.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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