You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start

Dear Mr Jhonson, I am writing to inform you that I will not be able
to begin
my job in your workplace
next
week
,owing to a few issues. I am looking for a new place to live in.I have been recommended by my friend that there is a rental house within walking distance of your office.
That is
why I will be busy
next
week
because of movement to the new house. I mentioned one of my problems.I have found out that there are some problems with regard to my new house.I have to repair them.
Furthermore
,my mother is taking meditation and it will be
next
week
. I would be grateful if you could give me an extra
week
in order to complete all of my tasks.I would like to start 10 days later.
Moreover
,it is a new month and the best time
to begin
a new job at a new company. If you require any
further
information please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.
Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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