Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtedly, Importing and exporting
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goods from
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other countries are a simple and important procedure over the
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decades. Some people
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that governments should take some efforts to produce most
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in their nation by importing little items from the other
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. I fully agree with
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the points with relevant examples. To embark with, there are some substantial reasons why I believe authorities should harvest
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foods
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in
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own
country
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and foremost,
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any government purchases
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substances from
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other nations, they must pay in international currencies like
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dollar.
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, they may have to pay three times higher than
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currency rate, which leads to unnecessary spending on
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food
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exportation.
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,
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process affects the economy of the
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significantly;
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, if governments grow
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and other
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ingredients in
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, they can save a large amount of money, which can be utilized for various development of
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country
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.
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, harvesting and producing
food
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in the
country
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bring more opportunities for farmers.
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, farmers can earn much more money than they used to, and the employment rate raise because more technical people and experts are required in
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whole process.
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, the rate of
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unemployment can
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.
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to
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,
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country
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can
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obtain a benefit on a tax amount
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being paid by new employees. To conclude, importing some
foods
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is indeed necessary
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I personally think that every
country
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should take some
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to
producing
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most
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foods
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food
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in
home
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country
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that boosts
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economical
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growth as well as offers more job vacancies for
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workers
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especially farmers.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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