More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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a large number of
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are on the point of disappearing and others are at risk of being endangered.
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issue occurred from two main factors.I will discuss them.
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,solutions exist to tackle
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problem. I believe that poaching is one of the biggest reasons for the extinction of wildlife.
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,an increasing number of poachers threaten
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' life directly.They will
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without paying attention to whether
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are on the endangered list or not.
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,hundreds of Arabian hunters travel to Azerbaijan to hunt specific birds that are on the verge of extinction.
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,sprawling cities are another reason because individuals are looking for new places to build a house,by constructing skyscrapers and buildings in areas where
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were living before.
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action obliges wildlife to leave their location.Sometimes,millions of them died,owing to a lack of adaptation.
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,in Africa peasants occupied elephant places.After a while,it is observed that the population of elephants have reduced significantly.Some of them were killed by indigenous people,others succumbed to diseases. it is quite obvious that there are a few solutions.One of the effective ways to mitigate
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concern is to apply harsh punishment against illegal hunters.It will deter them to kill endangered
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as well as the government can increase awareness of
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public about which
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are at risk and which are not.One explanation for
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,in Canada ,officials report an annual hunting list each year.They
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show which
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can not be hunted.
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,the government should take a tough step in order to protect flora and fauna from construction companies and farmers.
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is simply because these two segments of society are not concerned about wildlife.Millions of
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are victims of human activities. To conclude,certain
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such
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as mammoths and so on have disappeared over of
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years.
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concern is continuing today.To preserve nature and
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we have the above-mentioned effective methods.
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