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In many countries today young people are forced to get a job which they are not suited to or passionate about. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause?

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Nowadays, in a number of nations throughout the world getting an unfavourable
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 has forced the youth to work which they are not well qualified for or even more passionate
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 In my opinion, Having these jobs unwillingly is because of income issues and unawareness of self abilities
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 there are troubles like the disappointment of teenagers and financial costs for employers due to
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 situation. On the one hand, I believe that the main reason for
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 phenomenon is a controversial topic in different countries but there are two rationals. Primarily economic problems and money issues in most families make youngsters start working unwillingly in any type of
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 from school time to earn reasonable money for covering their tuition fees of college.
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, working from an early age young individuals has confusion about knowing themselves and their passionate
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 properly and they start a wrong career to which they are not well suited. From another angle, forcing people to get a
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 can result in many problems.
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, for a person spending long hours of time on a hateful
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 could be exhausting and they will never make any progress in their jobs or take any promotion;
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, they will be taken apart from their dream
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. More importantly, hiring a person who is not suited to the
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 perfectly can result in a huge cost while an appropriate candidate for a
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 can make more benefits. in conclusion, From my perspective having a forced
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 for each young people despite the causes can lead to a number of problems due to some rationals.
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