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School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of student than parents. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

#school #teachers #development #student #parents #yo
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actually cause develop
students
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Educator
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 help
students
 they
also
 them with when in trouble, And, coach teach goes to good way more than parents.
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school
 mentors
are
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also
 help their
students
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, when
students
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problem
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their
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school
 work
then
 help is
neccesary
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necessary
 or, they
helping
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 their
school
 child.and after
students
 get
best
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 results in their exams,
and
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they feel
happily
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 because their teachers are very honest to who.
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,
i
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 am requesting
to
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all the lecturers to please help
yours
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 learners. From my point of view while,
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a pupil
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pupil
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 study time more and more things experience from their teachers like
,
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 good behaviour and etc.
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, a survey has been qualified in India more and more
ancestor
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happy
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for
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this
.As that advantage their guardian When, they, good behaviour with his parents,
,
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creator feel
happily
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 with our
childrens
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children
children's
 and they feel very proudly. After
i
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 prefer
to
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all the
students
help
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 our parents and
giving
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 their respect. In conclusion,
i
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 am requesting to all the professors, provide great knowledge to their
students
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 future.
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