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In the modern world, more and more emphasis is being placed on the acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from text books or other sources. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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It's been noted that nowadays,
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 experience is becoming more important than
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text book
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knowledge
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discuss
 both pros and cons
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this
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situation
. Taking more
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on
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the
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practical
skills
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postive
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positive
 aspects.
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personal
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 aspect, the more working related
skills
 students practice, the easier they would get
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employed
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. And for
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 aspect, they could save a lot of time and money in teaching new employers.
For example
, a lot of software companies' job descriptions said they want to their applicants have related experience, so that students
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 in computer science who learned coding
skills
 and have
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 experience in development would have an advantage in the job market.
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knowledge
also
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 some negative aspects.
First
,
this
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innovation and hard to make progress
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these area
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 since people are more willing to learn how to use the
knowledge
 than the base of the
knowledge
. Like there is a phase "script kiddle" in
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 security industry which means the person only
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 how to execute the script but
not
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 know the details of the vulnerability which makes no
provement
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improvement
 for the
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insure
insidery
. In conclusion, there are both
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positive
 and negative sides
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 people
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take
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 more time on learning
skills
 than thesis
knowledge
 from books.
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