Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In our media-dominated era , most companies, in order to increase their margin, and to make a profit, advertisement has become their main tool. Some think it’s really helpful to make
choice
to purchase things, some say advertising is boring , it no longer brings enjoyment. I would agree that Correct article usage
a choice
campaign
ad is the most important factor Correct article usage
a campaign
to buy
some of our essential items. Almost every company’s marketing consists of advertisements, Change preposition
in buying
therefore
offering special prices to the customer. In my opinion, fancy clips and good visualized advertisement really catches my eye in a matter of seconds, I would be thinking about buying these products, even though it’s not really needed. For example
, in the morning if I watch a really good commercial about a new restaurant in town, I would
want to eat my lunch there, Verb problem
apply
that
means the commercial reached its main purpose. Correct pronoun usage
which
On the other hand
, some of the advertisements have become dull and we no longer pay attention to it. When after
a long working day, family members gather in front of the TV to watch their favourite program, but suddenly some shiny clips Rephrase
After
begun
to show and some familiar celebrity will be using that new skin product and she would say, use Wrong verb form
begin
this
product if you want to look fancy like me. Same
kind of advertisements, that Correct article usage
The same
this
essay mentioned above, will bore the customers, instead
they will be annoyed. Their favourite TV program is cut short because some company
established a new product that might be the same as their old ones. In summary, Verb problem
companies have
advertisement
is becoming so common, Replace the word
advertising
some
are affected Correct word choice
that some
Change preposition
by it’s
it’s
effects and buy things, Replace the word
its
some
say the Correct word choice
and some
growing
of Replace the word
growth
the
campaign Correct article usage
apply
ad
is uninteresting. The right visual will Fix the agreement mistake
ads
be catch
our attention immediately, in spite of its length of cutting short of our everyday TV programme. I would argue that a commercial is very helpful to choose between two similar items and to Change the verb form
catch
do
the right choice.Verb problem
make
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite