Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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provides
hunger
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second
means to give some meals for Correct article usage
the second
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those failing
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with hunger
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essay will examine both sides. And I will give my own point of view about this
case.
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on
a
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in
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hunger
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to people who much need. In Remove the article
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apply
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an equal
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Consequently
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support in future will get a job and will no longer Add an article
the same
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be put
into
starvation. Change preposition
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the solution
hunger
worldwide. Actually
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are already
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a
person
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a person
a food
. Remove the article
food
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with
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a strong
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a tool
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