Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There has been a significant divergence of opinion revolving around THE hunger fight can be handled throughout the world, by educating
people
. However
, another
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other
people
believe that giving free food
will overcome hunger. In my opinion, people
should pay attention on
their Change preposition
to
education
and after find
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finding
job
and solve the problem with
handling their basic needs. Change preposition
of
In
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This
this
essay will discussed
both sides.
On the one hand, educated Change the verb form
discuss
people
does
not think about hunger, most of them have enough money to feed themselvesChange the verb form
do
,
because they have Remove the comma
apply
education
and Correct article usage
an education
job
to solve their daily needs. There are several possibilities to increase the
income as well as taking extracurricular courses and Correct article usage
apply
education
degree
. It may help to improve some skills and knowledge which will be the reason to take a high-level paid Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
job
. For example
, nurse
can study at university and take Add an article
the nurse
a nurse
bachelor’s
degree, Correct article usage
a bachelor’s
as
a Correct word choice
and as
result
become a doctor. The same rule applies in all other sectors as well.
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On the other hand
, there are some people
who needs
help as Change the verb form
need
a
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apply
food
aid. They may be disable
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be disabled
be disabling
get
a Fix the infinitive
to get
job
where they have enough salary to feed themselves. Furthermore
, in grocery stores
a lot of Add a comma
,stores
food
with short product expiration date
and most of them fail to sell. It means that Fix the agreement mistake
dates
food
consumption is not high. That is
why the government could help to social
weak Change the word
socially
of
the population by feeding them. Change preposition
apply
For example
, in
the USA provided Change preposition
apply
food
banks for people
who need help with grocery
.
In conclusion, it is necessary to help Fix the agreement mistake
groceries
people
by giving opportunity
to take a free Add an article
an opportunity
the opportunity
education
and get some free food
if they need
. I believe, in Correct pronoun usage
itneed
future
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,future
this
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this person
these people
people
who was
needed will have Change the verb form
were
ability
to help Change the article
the ability
other
.Fix the agreement mistake
others
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