In contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I concur that everyone should have equal access to educational opportunities in a just society. I disagree,

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, that every topic at universities should accept an equal proportion of male and female students. Admissions choices ought to be made on the basis of merit and credentials rather than gender. The integrity of the admissions process can be harmed by accepting students based on quotas or fixed numbers, and it's possible that the best and brightest applicants won't be accepted.

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, it's critical to acknowledge that some professions can have a smaller proportion of female applicants, making it unlikely or inappropriate to mandate equal gender representation in these industries. It is

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important to recognize that some fields may have a lower percentage of female applicants.

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could be due to a variety of factors,

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as societal biases and stereotypes, lack of exposure to or encouragement in certain fields, or lack of role models and mentors. Mandating equal gender representation in these fields may not be feasible or appropriate, and

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, efforts should be made to address the underlying factors that contribute to the imbalance in representation.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Equal opportunities
Gender equality
Stereotypes
Diverse
Gender disparity
STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
Humanities
Quotas
Reverse discrimination
Meritocracy
Tokenism
Workforce
Leadership roles
Aptitude-based
Scholarships
Economic growth
Innovation
Social stability
Comparative analysis

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In contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The internet has revolutionized communication and access to information. However, some argue that its negative impacts such as isolation and the spread of misinformation, outweigh its benefits. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion.

Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in society today. How important is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

In some countries, people encourage their children to get a job or to travel after this and education what are the advantageous and disadvantage?