Some believe that it is good for a country's culture to import films and TV programs, while others think it is better for a Country to have their own films and TV programmes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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We should confess, of course, there are situations when an electronic translator is indispensable. Naturally,
such
programs and online services really help to cope with conversation barriers and help in simple everyday situations.
For instance
, when we come to another country with a non-spread language just to relax, (
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Montenegro),
then
the capabilities of the mobile application are enough to check into a hotel, find out the way to the beach or make an order in a cafe. Another example, with
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available translation software, we should not have to worry that we would not understand the official foreign document. There are several examples where knowledge of a language significantly helps to achieve goals.
Firstly
, when in negotiations a person needs to convince the interlocutor. When that person is
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able to fully participate in the conversation. Of course, a robotic voice from the application is unlikely to add weight to the arguments.
Secondly
, when someone wants to establish
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closer and warmer contact. It is
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common that a translation comes with a slight delay, which makes it difficult to make the conversation easy.
Thirdly
, we cannot use any jokes without knowing the language,
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we will suddenly be misunderstood.
Moreover
, it is a well-known fact that
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online translator does not distinguish intonation. It looks appealing to speak without assistance and understand texts when we want to learn
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country,
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culture and read the books of favourite writers in the original text.
For example
, when I was young the
first
two books in English that I read in English with great pleasure are Daddy-Long-Legs by Jean Webster and Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen. Now I can say from my own experience that reading hot news and watching great films in English. In my opinion understanding
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authentic speech gives any person
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special pleasure and confidence in life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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