Many people get little or no exercise either during the working day in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why many working people not get enough exercise? What can done about this problem?
Nowadays, most individuals are lacking
of
physical activities not only Remove the preposition
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in
weekdays but Change preposition
on
also
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in
weekends and Change preposition
at
this
will lead to various health issues Linking Words
such
as obesity, diabetes, high blood pressure and so on. Linking Words
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is happening due to most Linking Words
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the
people don’t have enough Correct article usage
apply
time
to Use synonyms
do
exercise Unnecessary verb
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for
themselves. And in Change preposition
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this
essay, Linking Words
consequences
of worrying Correct article usage
the consequences
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this
trend will be examined .
There are several factors responsible for Change preposition
about this
this
phenomenon of Linking Words
inactive
lifestyle. A major Add an article
an inactive
reasons
is that most working Change the noun form
reason
personal
are overworked and they don’t have Replace the word
personnel
work life
balance culture in the workplace. As Add a hyphen
work-life
as
result, human beings are exhausted from work and Correct your spelling
a
no
motivation to Add a missing verb
have no
workout
at the end of the day. On top of that, Correct your spelling
work out
adults
working personnel Fix the agreement mistake
adult
unable
to reserve Add a missing verb
are unable
time
for exercise on holidays because they would like to spend Use synonyms
time
with Use synonyms
Correct pronoun usage
their familys
familys
or beloved ones on Correct your spelling
family
families
the
resting days. Change the word
their
This
could be Linking Words
an
another excuse to avoid the regular Remove the article
apply
activtiy
.
Meanwhile, courses of action could be taken to address the above. A possible Correct your spelling
activity
activities
soulution
to improve no physical activities for Correct your spelling
solution
empolyee
is that the Correct your spelling
employee
employees
empolyer
should encourage Correct your spelling
employer
employee
staffs
to carry out regular sports during working hours by arranging Fix the agreement mistake
staff
the
mini team building events Correct article usage
apply
such
as cycling, jogging, hiking or running. Linking Words
In addition
, the management team should consider Linking Words
to operate
a gym at the office building for purpose of recreation and Change the verb form
operating
wellbeing
of in-house Correct your spelling
well-being
staffs
. Fix the agreement mistake
staff
Furthermore
, individuals should practice Linking Words
to perform
normal activities with their loved ones on weekends. Change the verb form
performing
For example
, they should bring family members to a park for morning exercise before having Linking Words
the
breakfast together. Correct article usage
apply
This
good habit will make use of their free Linking Words
time
wisely while doing sports, you can spend Use synonyms
time
with household members.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
sedentary
lifestyle could create health Correct article usage
a sedentary
complication
as well as a lack of social responsibility, especially for those people who Fix the agreement mistake
complications
unable
to separate between work and personal Add a missing verb
are unable
time
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
situation can be improved by inspiring people to get Linking Words
involve
in daily physical workouts.Change the form of the verb
involved
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