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some people think that mobiles are harmful for children , while others diagree. Discusse both side and give your opinion

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It is often claimed that cell
phones
 have a negative impact on kids.
however
, there are those who believe that mobile
phones
 and other digital devices are essential to extending the knowledge of elementary and pre-elementary students.
Nevertheless
, I hold the view that the advantages of smartphones
phones
 would outweigh the drawbacks if the time of using them gets controlled by parents. There are those who argue that digital
phones
 should not be used by those who are under 14 years old.
Also
, they believe that it can affect them in a bad way , so those
people
 must be limited by their families. On
one
 hand,
one
 of the most common applications on these smart devices is social media , and it is very simple to have an account on each
one
 of these platforms ,
also
 they are very interesting for every single person ,especially
children
, so
this
 object leads to lots of adults being active these applications. Some of these persons may misuse social media , so it is not an appropriate platform for under 14 kids and it can cause them to get abused by unknown
people
. On the other ,hand there are a huge amount of video games which can get easily installed by
children
 and these can make kids addicted to playing.
This
 causes students to get weak in their study and their education which can lead to bad consequences. It has been suggested that
children
 have to learn about technology and it is
one
 of the vital skills that every single student should know it. Nowadays science technology and telecommunication devices are changing and upgrading as soon as possible , so it can have lots of benefits for students to get familiar with these components. Maybe they will be the
next
people
 who bring us new technologies. In conclusion, we have two groups of
people
 the
first
 group says about the disadvantages of telecommunication
phones
 and the negative impact on
children
 and the
second
one
 believes that digital components are useful for developing the knowledge of
children
 growing up.
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