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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
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It's often argued that nobody will pay for traditional newspapers and
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books
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 in the
future
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 because they will access all the news and information online and for free. I completely agree with
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 opinion, and I think
people
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 will
use
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 online sources in the
future
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.
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 of all, I believe that we live in a cutting-edge era, and everything we
use
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 is electronic. Even now,
people
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 from all categories
use
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 the Internet to read updated news and recent
books
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;
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, just older persons of society who can't operate computers and mobiles properly are still reading magazines and printed
books
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. In the
future
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, these elderly
people
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 will be replaced by current children and youth who are totally familiar with technology and will be using the Internet and reading E-
books
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 without difficulty.
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,
books
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 and newspapers are made from trees.
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, logging companies cut the wooden bark of trees to produce
paper
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, which has a detrimental effect on our planet. Because it leads to the lack of green areas, which causes pollution and even the destruction of natural habitats, currently, environmentalists run a lot of campaigns to prevent cutting down trees, and they will probably succeed in the
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 and ban
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-based products and encourage
people
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 to
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 eco-friendly products.
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, the price of
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 is getting extravagant day by day, and many
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 can't afford that;
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, they inevitably quit the habit of buying
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 and tabloids and start to
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 online resources.
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, some exclusive
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 wouldn't be free of charge in the
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, but certainly, they will be much cheaper than
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books
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. To conclude, I strongly believe that society will
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 online resources
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 of traditional
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 in the
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 because of technological progress, the cost of
paper
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, and its harmful effect on the environment during its production.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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