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Is it useful to recycle glass bottles? Shoul people throw wasted bottle away? Your opinion

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In
this
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 modern era, it is irrefutable fact that various kinds of wastage increase drastically
such
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 as water, food and bottle. So I believe that individuals have to try to reduce
this
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 wastage with the help of recycled glass
bottles
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 because in
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 garbage there are different types of bacteria which lead to diseases.
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 with, it is quite necessary to reuse mirror
bottles
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 as if we throw them away and once it is broken
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people
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 get hurt in the leg.
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, jars which are made from glass are not only costlier but
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 recyclable so the community can easily recycle them to do hard wash or re-painting in the jar.
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, another benefit is that recycled
jar
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 prices are cheaper than fresh
bottles
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 so middle-class
people
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 can afford them and it is within their budget.
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, I believe that crowds do not throw wasted
bottles
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 in the garbage. I show many rich communities and especially at events after drinking water or juice
people
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 throw jugs in dustbins.
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, one research conducted by The Times of India found that 80% of
people
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 who attend social events or meeting throw
bottles
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 in the garbage and the waste of
bottles
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 are increase drastically. So I do not believe that the crowd should throw a jug in the dustbin. In conclusion, I reaffirm my views that individuals have to recycle glass
bottles
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 because it may help middle-class
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 and refurbished bottle prices are quite lower than new
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