Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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have brought significant challenges to our modern lives.Yet,there

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some disagreements as to whether the overall effects of

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level of sugary products have been negative.While

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there are certainly valid arguments to support

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statement.I personally agree that many individuals purchase manufactured food and drink which contain fuel of

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vital health harmer.

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of all,it is indisputable fact that

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sugary foods disrupt our healthy lifestyle with

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composition.There are many ways to avoid

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problem.

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,many people claim that the best way to solve the problem is

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price higher

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customers would not choose

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of harmful

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items are causes of many health problems.

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as coca cola which is

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drinks

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.

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,it is

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of

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too.It can harm

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our teeth

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because it contains

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.

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,

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are many aspects of these

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injurious meals and

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our lives.Many customers would like to buy

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which

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sugary.

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they do not aware of its drawbacks.So,they would not reduce to

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wrong and harmful lifestyle.

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actions.If the

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increase in our blood,it can

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different

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of diseases.If people read or watch any

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of news about

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they try to avoid these products. By way of my conclusion,I once again reaffirm

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position,the

manifactured

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manufactured

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amount of

sugar

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has been more negative in recent years.Many

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residents

buy them for delicious and palatable taste.There are many beneficial systems to decrease follow of

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products.One way is

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to make higher

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prices

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for them.All of them are more

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effective

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if people follow.