Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is true that the question of whether to study at

university

or get a job straight after

school

remains a source of controversy in the education field. While a number of people believe that working after graduating high

school

is better, I would argue that studying

at

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higher education is one of the best routes to a successful career. On the one hand, getting a job right after

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high

school

is a good option.

Firstly

, not many students have an opportunity to

enroll

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in

at

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the

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university

or college, so

that

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some of them decide to start their career paths straight after

school

in order to earn income for their personal life.

Secondly

, many young students are made to work

instead

of going to

school

, because their parents assume that going to

university

is so costly and

time wasting

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. In fact, students can earn more money to support

family’s

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finance when working at factories or industrial areas.

On the other hand

, I believe that studying at

university

or college is the best route to improve our life quality, not only

the

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career path. One of the most essential reasons for pursuing higher education is to get a qualified degree. A

bachelor

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or

master

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degree from form

university

is

a good evidence

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to demonstrate that we have enough

knowledges

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knowledge

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, capacity and academic experience to get a position with a high salary. Another reason is that we can broaden our

connection

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when studying at

university

. By participating in clubs or student organizations, we are able to meet new friends,

making

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a connection

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connection

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with people we want to collaborate with and develop together. In conclusion,

although

both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to continue the academic journey at

university

or college. I believe that we can have a better future

from

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our

bachelor

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degree.