Childhood obesity is being a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? What solutions can be offered?

Childish obesity is a major and high problem in most nations.

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lack of exercise and today's individuals don't do

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, they choose healthier

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in their daily based routines,

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with, most

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the children's not do exercise and do not

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to out

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As though, they don't do hard work.

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in India, students don't do exercises

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, As who uses mobile phone only and eat foods heavy diet etc they sleep in bed only.

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am requesting all the prisons do exercises in their leisure time.

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students are most obese and they so that,

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choose healthy diet in their life.

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is very important like whole grains, fruits and vegetables ,

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are very helpful.For consider in most studies have found fruits and meat is very fruitful if they are fatty . As

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prefer to who take healthy diets in their daily life. In conclusion.lack is exercise is an important factor in increasing obesity, As

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prefer to students only take good diets in their life.