Childhood obesity is being a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? What solutions can be offered?
Childish obesity is a major and high problem in most nations.
Firstly
lack of exercise and today's individuals don't do this
Secondly
, they choose healthier diet
in their daily based routines,
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diets
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with, most of
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goes
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go
their
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of their
home
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homes
For example
in India, students don't do exercises in
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at
homes
, As who uses mobile phone only and eat foods heavy diet etc they sleep in bed only. Fix the agreement mistake
home
i
am requesting all the prisons do exercises in their leisure time.
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students are most obese and they so that, Add a comma
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childrens
choose healthy diet in their life. Correct your spelling
children
children's
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prefer to who take healthy diets in their daily life.
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prefer to students only take good diets in their life.Change the capitalization
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