You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:- 1. describe your situation 2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work 3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing with regard to some issues which I am facing in the bedroom where I live in the Students Department since the
beggining
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beginning
of the semester. One month ago, two new students come to share a room with me, but since we started living together there was so much noise and I could sleep properly, as they work
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night shifts and arrive at home around 1 am, the sound to enter the place and
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to organize their belongings before to go to bed is quite annoying. As the result, in the mornings, I am so tired
that is
not possible to be productive as my job requires. I work in the IT support of the College and my salary is
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paid
based on the number of students I call and solve
this
problem as I am asleep, my
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monthly
goals
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not being achieved and it may be a reason to be fired in
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soon future. As the university has so many
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, I request to
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department consider
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me to another room where people have morning jobs rather than
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the end of
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, so that I could
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adapt myself to their routine and
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consequently
reach better results at my work. I look forward to receiving your response, Pollyanna Souza
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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