Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing with regard

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complaint about the noise which comes from my house. I am so ashamed about it that I ordered my operators to stop the machine, which is the main cause of the sound. Since my wife had discovered a problem with the water distribution inside our house, we started a reform to fix it and because of it is necessary to use a water pump to clear the pipes.

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not only the noise

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the vibration is a matter of our neighbourhood. In order to fix

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issue for all of us, we ask the company not only to change that mechanism but

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to turn it on only around 8 am to 3 pm. I really hope that these actions make a positive difference and that you could forgive us. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

162 words

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many offenders commit more crimes after their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages of renting a home? Should governments subsidies house prices for first home buyers?

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The floor plan shows changes made to a home during a 6-month period.

Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree?