Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing with regard
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complaint about the noise which comes from my house. I am so ashamed about it that I ordered my operators to stop the machine, which is the main cause of the sound. Since my wife had discovered a problem with the water distribution inside our house, we started a reform to fix it and because of it is necessary to use a water pump to clear the pipes.
Although
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not only the noise
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but
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the vibration is a matter of our neighbourhood. In order to fix
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issue for all of us, we ask the company not only to change that mechanism but
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to turn it on only around 8 am to 3 pm. I really hope that these actions make a positive difference and that you could forgive us. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale
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