You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter: – describe what you purchased, – explain why you are not happy with the purchase, – tell them what you would like them to do about the situation.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to express my annoyance with a purchase on your online store. I have ordered a set of soccer equipment’s that

were

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advertised on your site including a pair of soccer shoes as well as

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three set

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of socks.

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, on their arrival I found that it was only a set of socks were delivered.

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, I ordered boot size number 10 but I got 8 which caused me substantial inconvenience as it was not fit to me .

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, there were scratches on the boots that suggest that

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had been used before and returned to your store. I have since found the same offer on another website and will be returning the package to your store. I already read

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policy of your site and as I am dissatisfied with the product, I would like to request

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all

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fees including postal charges as well delivery charges. If you have any

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please email

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[email protected]. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nick Jones

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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