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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear neighbour, I am
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. who is residing beside your house
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I received a complaint letter from you regarding some disturbances from my house on Saturday and I was here to give the reason for the situation. on Saturday as it was my baby's birthday we invited our nearest families to the party. So there are many kids and everyone is playing and making a lot of noise. We are taking care of the kids by staying with them and some of the parents are using the restrooms with some water sounds. Unfortunately, it
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 some noise
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 you are sleeping.
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 want to apologise to you for the noise from my home. from now will take
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care bout all these
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 parties and will continue all these parties in some party rooms rather than homes and
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 letter.
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task response
Ensure the letter is focused on addressing the noise complaint specifically and provide a clear response to all parts of the task prompt.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate paragraphing and ensure the letter has a clear greeting and closing to maintain coherence and cohesion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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