Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best wat to reduce the rime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, it is irrefutable fact that crime rates are increasing drastically in both cities are ruler areas. Some groups of

people

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thought that the

people

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who do criminal

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are uneducated so if the government wants to reduce the rate of crime the only option is to give them an education in which those are interested. I will discuss both views in a

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essay.

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with,

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who are well educated along with a specific degree certificate only do good and positive things in their whole lives. In future, if they are gone in big financial trouble

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they find out ways to do the twice jobs in a day rather than do any criminal

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such

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as theft.

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, if authorities find

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who do these types of

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then

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the government should give them a good education with a certificate

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of hard punishment. A prisoner can change their remaining life with the help of that knowledge.

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, some

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do not want to change their personalities so if we gave them good life lessons they will not be good

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in society. It will be not only a waste of time but

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consumes individual tax amount portion.

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, one research conducted by The Times of India found that 70% of criminals are doing the same kind of

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after release from prison and they

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get good education knowledge still they do. In conclusion,

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who have a good certificate from well-known universities or colleges never thought about to do crimes so authorities give prisoners educational lessons.

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is the only way to reduce the proportion of criminal

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