Today more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is positive or negative development? Why?

These days, the importance of using
robots
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increasing step by step. The majority of
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people are using
robots
for household chores and industrial applications.
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Furthermore
, there are some drawbacks and merits. In
this
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will be discussed both sides. To start, in
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and age, androids are very popular in all
country
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countries
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. It is easy to use it. Most of the
hometasks
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home tasks
such
as mopping, dishwashing and others. In some nations,
robots
are need
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for working at
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.
For instance
, Amerika, France and Norway are suffering from a shortage of
staffs
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and
robots
fulfil
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the demands of
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labourers
tabourets
in the
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region
reason
. Despite
of
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this
trend, in some states
persons
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people
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are suffering
unemployment
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from unemployment
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.
Although
, the most alarming one is domestic nations
in
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other words, India,
Pakistan
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and Pakistan
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have more and more individuals and unemployment is increasing day by day.
Therefore
,
this
kind of
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cause
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to
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the
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numbur
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number
of people without Jobs.
Besides
, it is not superior
compores
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compared
compares
to individuals.
Moreover
, people have
many
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more
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skills rather than
robots
. In conclusion, androids are one
og
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of
the greatest inventions in the history of
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mankind
. In my opinion, they have made life much easier by helping at home
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