Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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been fairly dropped,

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on the other hand

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, a considerable number of people seem to think even more

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is yet to be accomplished. The essay will examine both views and argues in the favor of the latter.

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modernized civilization,

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all over the globe have been struggling not only to promote but

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progress in creating an equal and well-established environment for

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and

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, Which has been a successful revolution compared to ages ago.

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are treated with equal respect and credibility, are enabled to hold occupations in

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similar fields that

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do and aren’t rigidly believed to have to remain

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.

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, Recent statistics vividly imply that a noticeable number of

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willing to take a significant part in society have been

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while the statistics from years back suggest a rather fluctuating chart.

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between the genders

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been almost accomplished up to an acceptable point, it is argued that a plethora of aspects in which

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are equated to

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to pervasively change.

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,

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are provided with a wide range of job opportunities whilst

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applicant

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, are exhorted to be the

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priority for the same position, even if they attain an even more impressive talent, skill or potential. And

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due to nothing but sexism, and false ethics

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with. Seemingly, it is highly crucial for instiled foundations to adapt, for it is mainly the substantial standards to entitle

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to

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stereotyped folklore. In my perspective,

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between two genders

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become an obsessively pursued value that seems to be working

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, unless the significant effects that sway over the most deep-rooted morals, change and affect those, the rest of the efforts made to form greater changes are only secondary . In conclusion, even though

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courageous

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have been an active influence on how the world views

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, there is more practical

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left to be obtained.