Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is commonly believed that the gap between genders

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been fairly dropped,

however

on the other hand

, a considerable number of people seem to think even more

equality

is yet to be accomplished. The essay will examine both views and argues in the favor of the latter.

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with, in

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modernized civilization,

women

all over the globe have been struggling not only to promote but

also

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progress in creating an equal and well-established environment for

men

and

women

, Which has been a successful revolution compared to ages ago.

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are treated with equal respect and credibility, are enabled to hold occupations in

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similar fields that

men

do and aren’t rigidly believed to have to remain

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.

Moreover

, Recent statistics vividly imply that a noticeable number of

women

willing to take a significant part in society have been

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while the statistics from years back suggest a rather fluctuating chart.

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equality

between the genders

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been almost accomplished up to an acceptable point, it is argued that a plethora of aspects in which

women

are equated to

men

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to pervasively change.

For instance

,

men

are provided with a wide range of job opportunities whilst

women

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, are exhorted to be the

second

priority for the same position, even if they attain an even more impressive talent, skill or potential. And

that is

due to nothing but sexism, and false ethics

to begin

with. Seemingly, it is highly crucial for instiled foundations to adapt, for it is mainly the substantial standards to entitle

women

to

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stereotyped folklore. In my perspective,

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equality

between two genders

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become an obsessively pursued value that seems to be working

however

, unless the significant effects that sway over the most deep-rooted morals, change and affect those, the rest of the efforts made to form greater changes are only secondary . In conclusion, even though

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courageous

women

have been an active influence on how the world views

women

, there is more practical

equality

left to be obtained.