Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There has been a debate regarding which education method is better

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homeschooling and regular

school

. Both have their own benefits,

however

, some people may think one is better than the other.

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essay will examine the advantages of the two education methods followed by a suggestion of which method is superior compared to the other. Homeschooling presents two benefits, namely, continuous parent support and control, and the prevention of negative social influence.

While

children

are studying at home, the stay-home parent can monitor their

children

’s progress and provide support when necessary.

Moreover

,

children

at

school

are prone to bullying and negative social interactions. At home,

children

are safer as their interactions with others will be minimal.

On the other hand

,

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school

has

also

been proven to enhance

children

’s learning through collaborative

knowledge

and improved social skills. Students at

school

are often forced to work in groups and encouraged to share their ideas to achieve a greater idea.

This

exposes

children

to new

knowledge

that they might not be able to obtain by being isolated.

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interactions with other students will

also

improve

children

’s social skills. They will be able to listen to others better

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greater communication

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. In my opinion,

regular

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school

provides greater benefits compared to what is offered in homeschooling. Based on my own experience,

regular

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school

has taught me beyond the study materials given. It was the process of obtaining

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knowledge

through debate, observing others, and feedback from fellow students that

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improved my skills and

knowledge

.