Some people are happy to spend their whole life living in the same area. Others prefer to live in many different places in their lifetime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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different
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places in their
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places prisons.
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provide to ourselves respect and create
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ourselves
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in his
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in other cities.
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in
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life
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good condition lives in their family all the time very happily feel in his
life
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people
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life
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area they prefer and feel good.But, mostly goes abroad
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high lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sense of familiarity
  • Belonging
  • Community
  • Social connections
  • Local environment
  • Resources
  • Limited exposure
  • Different cultures
  • Experiences
  • Stagnation
  • Complacency
  • Personal growth
  • Development
  • Diverse cultures
  • Perspectives
  • Adaptability
  • Flexibility
  • Stability
  • Roots
  • Long-lasting relationships
  • Adjustment
  • New environments
  • Balanced approach
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