You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Abhinav, Hope you're doing well. You'
ll
be happy to know that I got my study visa and I'm coming to Australia
next
month. I need a favour for finding a part-time job for me. I'
ll
be living in
Edmonton
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area and so far, I've done the arrangements for my stay at a rented apartment near the college. I got admission
for
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the post-graduation in Artificial Intelligence and
thus
, for the
next
four years, I'
ll
be researching
in
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neural networks. You already know how much I am fascinated
about
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this
field. The thing is, the fee is quite out of my budget. I had applied for
scholarship
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but, unfortunately, another student received it. I'
ll
be unable to keep my finances without getting a suitable job. Though you and
me
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are
in
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the same profile, I was thinking if you can share my resume
to
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with
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suitable companies. I have a work experience of 2 years.
Additionally
, my manager is happy to provide a reference. I'm ready to give interviews before reaching there. Looking forward to
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you soon, Best Regards, Rubina
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