You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Abhinav,
Hope you're doing well. You'
ll
be happy to know that I got my study visa and I'm coming to Australia next
month. I need a favour for finding a part-time job for me.
I'll
be living in Edmonton
area and so far, I've done the arrangements for my stay at a rented apartment near the college. I got admission Correct article usage
the Edmonton
for
the post-graduation in Artificial Intelligence and Change preposition
to
thus
, for the next
four years, I'll
be researching in
neural networks. You already know how much I am fascinated Change preposition
apply
about
Change preposition
by
this
field.
The thing is, the fee is quite out of my budget. I had applied for scholarship
but, unfortunately, another student received it. I'Add an article
a scholarship
ll
be unable to keep my finances without getting a suitable job.
Though you and me
are Change the pronoun
I
in
the same profile, I was thinking if you can share my resume Change preposition
apply
to
suitable companies. I have a work experience of 2 years. Change preposition
with
Additionally
, my manager is happy to provide a reference. I'm ready to give interviews before reaching there.
Looking forward to see
you soon,
Best Regards,
RubinaChange the verb form
seeing
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite