Some people are happy to spend their whole life living in the same area. Others prefer to live in many different places in their lifetime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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5Word repetition
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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sense of familiarity
Belonging
Community
Social connections
Local environment
Resources
Limited exposure
Different cultures
Experiences
Stagnation
Complacency
Personal growth
Development
Diverse cultures
Perspectives
Adaptability
Flexibility
Stability
Roots
Long-lasting relationships
Adjustment
New environments
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You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: -explain why you are interested in helping -Give details suitable past experience -suggest ways you might help with the event.

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