Some people are happy to spend their whole life living in the same area. Others prefer to live in many different places in their lifetime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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few
people
are joyful to live their complete
life
in
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area
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,others considered to live their
life
in various locations.I consider that we should spend
time
in
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all over by
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visiting
various
places
world. On the one hand,there are
people
who believe that they should spend
there
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complete
life
in
same
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locality because as we live there for many years we have
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notion of each and every
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and know about
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our neighbours
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,
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,If we know
area
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very well
then
we can take help from our neighbours as they are
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integral part of our
life
and we can trust
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them
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completely as we are with them for
the
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long
time
.They
also
believe that if we
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stick to one
area
then
it will be easy for the
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children
children's
education,so that child can learn from single school with complete focus.
On the other hand
,there are
people
who think that individuals should change
there
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places
from
time
to
time
as they can look into new
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environment
environments
they feel happy rather
then
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spending all
life
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their life
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in one
area
.
For instance
,if
people
visit various cities
then
they get knowledge of different things especially they get
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new
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taste
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from different cities of food because every
area
has its own fame and the individual can experience that.I
agreen
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agree
with
this
statement because if we visit
number
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of
places
then
we get a chance to experience
different
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taste
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of food from
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restaurants
and
also
we will become bold. In conclusion Despite
the
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people
have different views that they are happy to live in
same
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the same
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area
and they want to change
thier
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their
place from
time
to
time
.I believe that we should spend our whole
life
in various
places
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sense of familiarity
  • Belonging
  • Community
  • Social connections
  • Local environment
  • Resources
  • Limited exposure
  • Different cultures
  • Experiences
  • Stagnation
  • Complacency
  • Personal growth
  • Development
  • Diverse cultures
  • Perspectives
  • Adaptability
  • Flexibility
  • Stability
  • Roots
  • Long-lasting relationships
  • Adjustment
  • New environments
  • Balanced approach
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