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As global trade increases,many goods , including those we use on daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefit of this trends outweigh its drawback?

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It is indisputable fact that nowadays
people
 choose some products from other countries.
This
 pattern might
beneficial
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 for the population
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able
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 to outweigh its drawback.
This
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both positive and negative impacts and the writer believes that
convience
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convenience
 will surpass the hitch. To commence with, there are several reasons why the trend of
world-wide
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 trade has some detrimental effects. The first one is
people
 will take a charge of postage
fee
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, resulting in higher costs than usual.
Furthermore
, there are some risks in the packages presumably,
such
 as broken items, and
stuck
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 at customs. The packages will be delayed because of the long distance. Another point to consider is the advantages of the trend which may able to ease the disadvantages. If
people
 get
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imported items, they will sell
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 to
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other
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high-quality but low-price goods.
Secondly
, it can prevent
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inflation
from
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 the
country
. It might
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 because in there are overpriced in the
country
.
Thirdly
, it can improve the technology
from
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 the
country
, because the
country
 can't make the products.
According to
this
, the imported items can
fulfill
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 the domestic demands that cannot
being
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 created. They will achieve raw materials, semi-finished goods, or finished goods that
able
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 to complete the
finish
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 product.
For example
, if the public imports iron and steel bars, the construction of
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 will be upgraded.
To sum up
,
while
 importing has so many
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, it
also
 has profit related to the price, inflation and technology. The advantages will surpass the disadvantages of the trend.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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