In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While
some citizens advocate to expend
a huge amount of funding on building new Change the verb form
expending
railways
which are used for very fast trains
between two
cities, others think Correct article usage
the two
the
improving current public Correct article usage
apply
transport
is better. Although
a number of benefits in run
new fas-speed Change the verb form
running
trains
, I believe developing existing public transport
infrastructures could be important
On the one hand, it is logical that some people
thought that new railways
leading to new and fast trains
are necessary. There is no doubt that speed is one of the most important characteristics of our fast-changing world. This
issue will get importance
when it comes to Replace the word
important
transfer
Change the verb form
transferring
people
between two cities where it's
inhabitants tend to commute. Their Correct your spelling
its
travel's
time is reduced and so it can play an important role in day-to-day life. Those Change noun form
travel
trains
that
is
very fast compared to current Change the verb form
are
trains
, will not move on the existing railway lines, thus
needing to new
foundation is crucial. Japan, Add an article
the new
a new
for example
, which is known as a pioneer country in this
topic, has built new railways
that bring about surge
in transportation speed.
Add an article
a surge
On the other hand
, there are some compelling reasons that the most funding should be allocated on
improving public Change preposition
to
transport
that used
currently by many Add a missing verb
is used
people
. Firstly
, it is so cheaper as opposed to build
new Wrong verb form
building
railways
because it's
Correct your spelling
its
infrastructure
is exist and Add an article
the infrastructure
it's create
Change the verb form
it creates
situation
leading to Correct article usage
a situation
spend
less money. Change the verb form
spending
Secondly
, current means of public transportation is
receiving currency and using them do not need to teach new instructions to Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
. Finally
, improving existing public transport
could be finished as soon as constructing
Replace the word
construction
new
Change preposition
of new
railways
. Take common public means as an example; replacing old buses with new
Add an article
a new
the new
one
is cheaper, faster and more convenient than Fix the agreement mistake
ones
run
high-speed Add an article
a run
train
.
In conclusion, there are two opposing views on Fix the agreement mistake
trains
this
trend, some people
believe that constructing new railways
is vaital
, others think that improving public Correct your spelling
vital
transport
infrastructures is better, I personally take the letter view on the basis increase the speed of contruction
and reduce costs.Correct your spelling
construction
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