In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While
some citizens advocate Linking Words
to expend
a huge amount of funding on building new Change the verb form
expending
railways
which are used for very fast Use synonyms
trains
between Use synonyms
two
cities, others think Correct article usage
the two
the
improving current public Correct article usage
apply
transport
is better. Use synonyms
Although
a number of benefits in Linking Words
run
new fas-speed Change the verb form
running
trains
, I believe developing existing public Use synonyms
transport
infrastructures could be important
On the one hand, it is logical that some Use synonyms
people
thought that new Use synonyms
railways
leading to new and fast Use synonyms
trains
are necessary. There is no doubt that speed is one of the most important characteristics of our fast-changing world. Use synonyms
This
issue will get Linking Words
importance
when it comes to Replace the word
important
transfer
Change the verb form
transferring
people
between two cities where Use synonyms
it's
inhabitants tend to commute. Their Correct your spelling
its
travel's
time is reduced and so it can play an important role in day-to-day life. Those Change noun form
travel
trains
Use synonyms
that
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is
very fast compared to current Change the verb form
are
trains
, will not move on the existing railway lines, Use synonyms
thus
needing to Linking Words
new
foundation is crucial. Japan, Add an article
the new
a new
for example
, which is known as a pioneer country in Linking Words
this
topic, has built new Linking Words
railways
that bring about Use synonyms
surge
in transportation speed.
Add an article
a surge
On the other hand
, there are some compelling reasons that the most funding should be allocated Linking Words
on
improving public Change preposition
to
transport
that Use synonyms
used
currently by many Add a missing verb
is used
people
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, it is so cheaper as opposed to Linking Words
build
new Wrong verb form
building
railways
because Use synonyms
it's
Correct your spelling
its
infrastructure
is exist and Add an article
the infrastructure
it's create
Change the verb form
it creates
situation
leading to Correct article usage
a situation
spend
less money. Change the verb form
spending
Secondly
, current means of public transportation Linking Words
is
receiving currency and using them do not need to teach new instructions to Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
. Use synonyms
Finally
, improving existing public Linking Words
transport
could be finished as soon as Use synonyms
constructing
Replace the word
construction
new
Change preposition
of new
railways
. Take common public means as an example; replacing old buses with Use synonyms
new
Add an article
a new
the new
one
is cheaper, faster and more convenient than Fix the agreement mistake
ones
run
high-speed Add an article
a run
train
.
In conclusion, there are two opposing views on Fix the agreement mistake
trains
this
trend, some Linking Words
people
believe that constructing new Use synonyms
railways
is Use synonyms
vaital
, others think that improving public Correct your spelling
vital
transport
infrastructures is better, I personally take the letter view on the basis increase the speed of Use synonyms
contruction
and reduce costs.Correct your spelling
construction
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