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Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money money on other things to benefit the nation . To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Space
 exploration is an exciting activity among powerful countries. Spending money on exploring
space
 would be worthless and it had better use for the country's benefit. In my opinion, I quite disagree that it is a total waste
money
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 for
space
 missions because it would lead to figuring out how the universe works and developing future technology for humans. Exploring the
Earth
 outside
,
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requires a large budget
for
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the
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exploration. The outside world is completely different from the
earth
 because it does not have oxygen for life. It needs to have a support machine to produce the gas for breathing.
In addition
, The radiation would affect directly
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the pilot's body and would be harmful to the skin and metabolism.
Therefore
, it requires a specific suit for the
space
 team.
Moreover
, not just the rocket but the supportive machine that the government is to invest in is very expensive. These costs are reasonable for the
space
 activity. The many advantages of the mission beyond the
Earth
 are worth it spending. Nowadays,
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scientist is likely to precisely predict the weather because
the
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satellites,
for instance
, around the world collect weather data continuously and send it to the
earth
 .
This
 technology is
achievement
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 because of
space
 technology. The
space
 station
also
 uses solar light to produce power from
solar
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cell
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. It would reduce the cost of fuel and energy production. In conclusion, The budget for
space
 exploration is essential for people and the environment in the future. All countries would like to invest in renewable energy and find a solution
for
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climate change. That's why the outside
Earth
 would be an opportunity to be the
next
 step for humans.
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  • complete waste
  • benefit the nation
  • technological advancements
  • foster
  • international cooperation
  • inspire
  • engage
  • boost the economy
  • long-term benefits
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