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Do you think that parents should be punished if their five-year-old child commits a crime? From what age should children be held responsible for their own behaviours?

#parents #child #crime #age #children #behaviours
some argue that if
victim
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 is a child who is five
years
 old,
they
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parents
 ought to fine
instead
 of their
offsprings
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. I agree with
this
 trend and I hold the view that
children
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who are under 15
years
 old had better not punish for their crime and their
parents
 have
responsibilites
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responsibilities
about
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 their crimes. on the one hand, five
years
 old
children
 are too young without any
experiences
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experience
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 and
underestanding
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understanding
 of what acts or behaviours can be right or wrong. it is the duty of
parents
 to teach them about
unappropriate
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inappropriate
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, deleterious, and antisocial
treats
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threats
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 and they should supervise the acts of their young
children
 as they are not predictable and their
fail
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 to
concieve
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conceive
 damaging situations and encourage them to perform
positive
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the positive
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 activity and rectify their mistakes .
therefore
, if these
children
 commit a crime their
parents
 have obligation to be responder
instead
 of their young girls and boys. on the other have,
chidren
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children
 under 15 are still raw and vulnerable, they have certain experiences, yet
these
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 little amount of information
are
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 not sufficient and they require their
parents
 still contribute to doing some of their personal chores,
whereas
 they imagine have enough expertise and dexterity to step in real life independently and they may
fulfill
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 some activities through their peer and other people pressures. above mentioned
years
children
,
however
, possess sufficient skills and information about their countries law as they learn many instructive data at schools and they are more familiar with society.
thus
, they are responsible
with
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for
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 their own acts.
to sum up
, young
childrens'
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children's
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parents
 have to control their
children
 and avoid them
commiting
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committing
 crimes as they are assailable with insufficient knowledge and proficiency and they
more
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are more
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 likely to
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be impressed
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impressed
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 by other adults and
childrens
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children
.
in contrast
, elder
children
 know the crimes and their outcomes.
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