People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

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Lately, the rise of illicit
drug
abuse among
youth
has come into
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.
Eventhough
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Even though
using
drugs
is normalized in all modern societies,
young
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generation tends to experiment with legal and illegal
drugs
even at an early age. In
this
essay
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I will discuss the causes and effects of
this
extensive
drug
usage among youngsters in
the
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modern society.  Why is the
youth
more vulnerable to
drug
abuse?
Firstly
, the young mind is driven by curiosity. During
this
stage, they are in need of companionship and
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superior. So they can easily be persuaded into trying these
drugs
by strangers or by their own peers.
This
limitless curiosity may one day become the harbinger of many adverse effects on their life.
Secondly
, some may use higher dosages without their knowledge and might even
loose
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their life.
For instance
, fentanyl overdose in the USA has skyrocketed among their
youth
during the past year and most deaths were
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first time
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users. To prevent
the
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young adolescents from obtaining certain
drugs
like Oxycodone and Fentanyl,
medical
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presciption
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prescription
system should be introduced to the pharmacies.
Then
, only the ones who are actually in need will be able to access these types of
drugs
, not children. Even
the
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legal
drugs
like cough syrup in large quantities can be harmful too. So there should be proper supervision to find out who
recieves
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receives
the
drugs
Consequently
, if we can arrange a few visits to see
drug
addicts in reformation
centers
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, we can let students experience
repercussions
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the repercussions
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drugs
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of drugs
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. If we can educate the
youth
about the
drugs
such
as
heroine
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heroin
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, methadone, and their respective side effects,
then
we can reduce the formation of new
drug
users.
Overall
, fighting the battle of
drug
abuse in the
youth
is getting harder and harder
everyday
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but it is our duty to save them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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