You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: •say why he/she would not enjoy going to college •explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her •suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Ruby, How are you doing? I hope you are relaxing after completing your school. I received your letter a week ago and seeking advice about going to higher education or getting a job. I am glad to give advice about

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matter. As per my knowledge about you, I don't think that you would enjoy the college atmosphere because it would be a world of fashion, fun and parties rather than education. I know that you are

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an introverted person so you will definitely fail to get friends

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. If you want to get a change from

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type of environment, better to find a job which is suitable for you. That would change your mindset and leads you to earn money and

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can be a supporting system for your family. Since you have been knitting since your childhood, it would be a good choice for you to turn your hobby into a profession. It would make your life more enjoyable. Hope to see you soon and all the very best for your future endeavours. Your friend Asha

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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