Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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In
this
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contemporary
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, more
that
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than
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thausand
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thousand
thousands
of
languages
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use to communicate by showing their uniqueness. Most of them try to learn these different types of vocal
sound
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sounds
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to
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their needs and desires. Especially, those who love travelling and working in different
kind
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kinds
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of areas. I suppose that only for these things but
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we apply foreign
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for various things.
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my view, youngsters like to do their higher studies away from their motherland to experience
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a multi-cultural
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multi-cultural
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multicultural
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society and achieve their personal goals.
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, they can earn money
while
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studying
their
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apply
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, if they
fluent
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are fluent
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in
native
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the native
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language
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where they live for studies. For
an
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apply
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example,
student
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a student
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who
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to
entir
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enter
as
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international student
in
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a
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world famous
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world-famous
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university, definitely he or
she
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apply
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has to show their
language
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proficiency by doing IELTS.
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, we are
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human beings
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who can not live alone
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this
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in this
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global
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.
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of
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we have to communicate with other nations to build up and continue a good
relationship
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relationships
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. For an instance, political leaders who maintain connections with other countries must know
few
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a few
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language
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languages
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to keep political with them,
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, miscommunication will make a huge disaster. To contrast, most
of
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apply
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European
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the European
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travel as a
lesuire
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leisure
activity during
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the winter
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season, so they use their
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skills for that.
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, everyone needs money, so people do their jobs with multi-national communities,
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and they
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they
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apply
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also
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need
this
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skill. These are
main
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the main
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reasons for using foreign
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.
To sum up
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, I can conclude that though we use different
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for our career path and
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travel
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around the
world
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, there are more reasons
also
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connected with choosing it and it
depend
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depends
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on the individual needs
as well as
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social needs.
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