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Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study some or all of their course in a foreign country .Do the advantages outweigh disadvantagea?

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 of all, Over the past 20 years, the education system has experienced several shocks, and even in the best universities and schools, the level
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 teaching, unfortunately, is steadily declining. At the same time, foreign educational institutions continue to improve their educational methods and upgrade their infrastructure,
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 fierce competition among them leads to
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gradual increase in the quality of education received widely. Studying overseas is
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beneficial
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 for your future,
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, your worldview will change very much a few of than before,
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, you will strengthen your foreign language.
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, you can open your own business abroad and at the same time master various ways of the economy. Of course, using
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 knowledge, you can expand your small business and even organize
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 in other countries. One of the downsides of studying abroad is that your family members will be long
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, you may be homesick for your home country, and you may have financial problems.
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