Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?
Many countries are worrying about
people
who have a lack of the ability to read and write nowadays. I think there are two main causes and several effects, which I will outline now. The main cause is probably people
who live far from urbanization or rural areas are likely to have chance
of becoming literate less than the villagers. It is a well-known reason that teachers are not employed in a sparsely populated area. The second key cause is a certain part of the total population of many countries does not have the natural ability to learn Add an article
a chance
the chance
this
kind of knowledge. If that number of people
have severe mental illness, their chances of study
something in any part of education institutions may be even lower. Change the verb form
studying
Firstly
, Due to
an individual's inability to acquire enough knowledge and information without the help of others, their opinion is sold and easily influenced by others who are not even sure whether he
can lead others. Correct pronoun usage
they
Secondly
, Universal Education is a social immunity in which every member of a social
is a cell, and uneducated citizens can have the effect of Replace the word
society
bad
example for their children and future individuals. Correct article usage
a bad
To sum up
, lack of access to hard skills which should be learned and the inability to learn something could be the main reason for being unable to read or write, and those people
have the negative side of being easily affected by someone and setting a bad example for the next generation and the youth.Submitted by alexstudyin on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite