Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?
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who do not have enough knowledge is certainly a topical issue, in many nations around the world today. There are two main cause
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causes
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lack
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rights
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For instance
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per cent
people
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had lived in countryside
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the countryside
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area to study as much as possible. Change the word
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USA
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salary
is not enough. To cite the most recent news I have heard as an example, in Mongolia, parents seem to decide if their children do not study well, they will tend to become a herdsman or woman. Add an article
a salary
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