Nowadays, more and more people are travelling to other countries. Is it a positive or negative development?

In

this

contemporary era, The

world

becomes

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like a city where people can reach any corner of the

world

within a few hours by using new technology,

such

as aeroplanes. It is trending these days that individuals tend to move to other countries for several reasons,

for instance

, to look for

the

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better job opportunities and explore the

world

. Which is definitely a positive development.

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essay will more explore in the coming paragraph.

To begin

with, If we compare today with a century ago, there were

not

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such

facilities for everyone to go abroad and search to set up a better life.

However

, these days individuals easily can fulfil their requirements and travel anywhere in the

world

. where can get higher education and find a lot of opportunities as per their qualifications and earn good rewards to live

luxury

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life.

For instance

, As per the survey report of the Canadian government, 40% of students only reach CANADA every year for higher study and to get a work permit.

Thus

, To seek for higher education and

have

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a good job is one of the best positive outcomes for

this

trend.

Further

strengthening the view of favourable development is to roam the

world

and enjoy the diversity of

culture

. To explain it, every

nation

has its own

tradition

and

culture

and every

culture

is unique for it is

nation

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a nation

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. People can easily get to know each other's

culture

and traditions by visiting their places and

watch

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closely which can be beneficial for the

nation

to contribute

in

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to

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the the economy by tourists.

For Example

,One island in the Indian

ocean

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Ocean

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near Sri Lanka is called Secluded. The tribe of

this

island is still living the life

as

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of

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18th

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the 18th

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century. They are totally carnivores and live in the grass huts. They are totally unaware of modern technology. Indian or anybody can easily go and see the

18th-century's

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18th-century

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environment over there and observe their

culture

and

tradition

.

Consequently

,

To explore

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the

world

's

culture

and

tradition

is enjoyable and helps to thrive economically. In conclusion, The trend of travelling people other countries not only gives the opportunity to

acquirehigher

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acquire

study and get settled but,

also

give

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gives

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chance to roam around the

world

to see the diversity of each

nation

's

culture

and

tradition

.