The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

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The table compares the number of citizens in

Argentina

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,Indonesia,Italy and the Korean Republic in 2003 with the forecast for 22 and 47 years.The information is provided to millions of people. As the data suggests, Indonesia is the most densely populated country and is going to keep growing steadily (from 238

million

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to 312) in sharp contrast to

Argentina

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,which has seven times fewer residents(34

million

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, the number of Argentines is going to rise to reach the point of 62

million

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and it will become the

second

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most populated country. Turning to Italy,which has almost four times fewer people than

Argentina

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(54

million

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),it is going to decline sharply to the point of 45

million

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in 2050,

whereas

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the number of Koreans will increase from 4

million

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to 2025 remaining stable in the

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25 years.

To sum up

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all of the above,Indonesia will still have the highest population by 2050,

whereas

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Argentina

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's and Korea's will grow gradually,

in contrast

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to Italy,which will drop slightly,

annaosmateskoTue Jan 24 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

159 words

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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

In many countries, people are consuming more sugar-based drinks that ever before. Why is this happening? What chould be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?

Many students choose to complete at least some part of their university studies in a foreign country. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case ? do you think this is a positive or negative developement?

Some people believe that it’s acceptable for the media to publish the details of famous people’s private lives.Others say that it should be stopped.