The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.
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The table compares the number of citizens in
Argentina
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,Indonesia,Italy and the Korean Republic in 2003 with the forecast for 22 and 47 years.The information is provided to millions of people. As the data suggests, Indonesia is the most densely populated country and is going to keep growing steadily (from 238
million
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to 312) in sharp contrast to
Argentina
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,which has seven times fewer residents(34
million
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).
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, the number of Argentines is going to rise to reach the point of 62
million
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and it will become the
second
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most populated country. Turning to Italy,which has almost four times fewer people than
Argentina
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(54
million
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),it is going to decline sharply to the point of 45
million
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in 2050,
whereas
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the number of Koreans will increase from 4
million
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to 2025 remaining stable in the
next
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25 years.
To sum up
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all of the above,Indonesia will still have the highest population by 2050,
whereas
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Argentina
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's and Korea's will grow gradually,
in contrast
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to Italy,which will drop slightly,
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