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More and more people are choosing to eat ready-made meals rather than freshly cooked food. Does this trend have more advantages than disadvantages?

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this
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 growing world, people believe in smart work rather than hard work. I partially agree and
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disagree
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, in
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eassy
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 will be sharing my opinion for both situations. In terms of benefits, people are choosing to eat
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meals
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 for many reasons and one of the major
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 is
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time consuming
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.
Time
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 is important for everyone in
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 era. These ready-made
meals
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 are easily accessible in markets and easy to make with
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 amount of waste generated in the kitchen. Another, perhaps less altruistic advantage is the storage.
these food
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 can be stored for over
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period
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 of
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. There are,
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, some drawbacks
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 these ready-made
meals
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 as they are not
healthly
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healthy
 to eat
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because
 various
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types
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 of harmful
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preservatives
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 and food colours are added to these
meals
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. These chemical preservatives
damges
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damages
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 organs if
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counter
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of
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periods. Another drawback the little waste generated is non-
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biodegradable
wastes
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 which
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causes
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enivorment
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environment
 crisis. In the end, the usage of these
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 foods should be limited. People should take
time
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 out from
busy
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 life and cook
meals
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beacause
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because
 it is good for
body
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as well as
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 for
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 mental health
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