Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

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Education

is the backbone of a country’s future,

while

a good job is a key factor for a better life.

This

topic is of particular importance because it affects everyone’s life.

This

essay will discuss whether the pupils should complete their higher education or

to

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start work after school. On one hand,

university

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a university

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education is mandatory to get some type of

jobs

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job

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. By

this

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I mean that

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apply

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people who choose to become a doctor,

pharmacist

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pharmacists

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,

engineer

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engineers

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,

pilot

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pilots

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etc. are required to complete their degrees before they can be able to get a job

,

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apply

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because

this type

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these types

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of

jobs

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need

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needs

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specialized knowledge before starting

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career. For

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, General Medical Counsel in the UK accepts only doctors who completed their

degree

and passed some predefined exams to start

career

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a career

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as a doctor. In

this

instance, obviously, it would be better to complete the required

university level

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degree

first.

On the other hand

, there are some benefits if students start working early.

For example

, a fashion designer could start working as soon as s/he finishes school because those types of

jobs

require more experience than study.

Moreover

, working at early

ages

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might help students to be more independent and responsible in their life, through learning how to control their spending,

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and how

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to enhance their knowledge and skill.

To conclude

, there are some types of

jobs

that require a

university

degree

.

Nevertheless

, starting work after school has a good side as well. It depends on the type of

jobs

which students prefer and

are

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likely to have in the future. Perhaps,

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a university

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degree

and work experience are both important and they each other complete the criteria to get a respectable job.